Take your 60-second demo script and your recorded voice memo. Upload both to your AI tool (Claude, ChatGPT, or your choice). Ask it to:

1. Rewrite the problem statement to be more urgent or concrete. Compare the original and rewritten versions—which one makes you want to watch the demo?

2. Tighten the script so it's naturally 60 seconds (not rushed, not padded). Strip any filler phrases or secondary details.

3. Flag places where the audience needs visual clarity—moments when you should slow down, pause, or point at something on screen.

Export the polished script. Speak it aloud again. Record a second take.

Submit:

• The original script
• The AI-polished script (with notes on which changes you kept)
• A 2–3 sentence reflection: Did the AI rewrite hit harder? What did you change your mind about after hearing the second take? What's the hardest part of sounding natural while staying on time?